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Re: Watched - Prologue
SyntheticMan: Hey! Thank you so much for the review! I was so happy when I read your second paragraph, you asked all the questions I wanted to convey. This is ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Watched - Prologue
I peak my head out of the quilt with squinting eyes. The curtains are fluttering weakly and the sun is shining through them, giving my room a pale look of ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: The Elements: Secrets of the River (Prologue)
I loved this. I really, really loved this. It had all the passion you could ask for, love and hate was central without even knowing anything about what laid behind ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: You cannot prevent what you cannot predict
”I don’t bloody care!” he said, not even looking up from the TV where the game was playing. “I have told you everything I know, all about what happened, and ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: The day my world collapsed
Great story, so well written! I could honestly feel the mood and my heart started to race by the end of it all. You really do know how to create ...
Aug 30, 2009
